PROCEDURE FOR RESEARCHING AND WRITING A THESIS
IN PHYSICAL ANTHROPOLOGY
NOTE THAT IF YOU ARE NOT DOING A THESIS IN PHYSICAL
ANTHROPOLOGY THESE GUIDELINES MAY NEED TO BE
MODIFIED. ASK YOUR ACADEMIC ADVISOR.
One of the core requirements of most graduate
programs is some form of research project. Our program
at UM is no exception. When a graduate research
project is written up, the resulting document is called
a thesis or dissertation. Usually, the term
dissertation is reserved for a specific type of thesis
prepared while earning the Ph.D. degree.
STEPS IN A GRADUATE RESEARCH PROJECT
- Choose a project.
- Write a proposal for your project.
- Choose a thesis committee. There is a form for
doing this that has to be filed at the graduate
school. Submit your proposal to the committee
members.
- Do your research.
- Write up your thesis and present a draft to your
committee members. Make any changes or additions
that your committee requires and resubmit it.
Repeat this step as often as necessary. When your
committee decides you are ready to defend your
draft, work with them to set up a time and place
for your thesis defense. File your defendable
draft at the graduate school, along with the
proper form.
- Defend your thesis. When you pass, file the
proper form at the graduate school. Make a final
draft of your thesis, make sure that it's in the
format required by the graduate school. Make an
abstract, title page, etc. Submit the required
number of copies of your final draft (along with
the proper form and fees) to the graduate school.
CHOOSING A RESEARCH PROJECT
Although you should consult with your faculty
advisor and potential thesis committee members, the
task of choosing a research project is your
responsibility. Your advisor will not choose a project
for you.
Your project should be on a topic that is
interesting to you, and which your committee members
know something about.
As part of your research you must do something
original, either gather new data, analyze existing data
in a new way, or apply some new principle. In other
words, a research project is not a term paper - you
can't simply do a summary of existing knowledge from
the library. In some way or another you must generate
new knowledge.
The most important factor in choosing a thesis
project is whether it is "doable". By "doable" we mean
whether or not you can actually do it in a
reasonable amount of time. Plan to spend about one
semester doing your research, and about one semester
writing and defending your thesis.
There are many things that affect whether or not a
thesis project is doable. A doable project is usually
one that is narrowly focused on a single testable
hypothesis. In order for a project to be doable,
appropriate collections, specimens, populations,
archives, or similar sources of data must be available.
In order to be doable, methods must exist for gathering
and analyzing appropriate data in order to generate
some result and draw some conclusion.
Unfortunately, we do not have many physical
anthropology data sources available at UM, which means
that many students will have to travel to other
universities or museums in search of data. Resources
available at UM include the following:
- The Mansfield Library: Data sets of many types,
from many places in the world can be found at the
library or through interlibrary loan. Historical
archives are available.
- The Forensic Collection: about 65 specimens of
various ages, sexes, races, and degrees of
completeness. We do not have any identifyable
Native American remains.
- The Boas data set. This is a set of
anthropometric data on over 16,000 Native
Americans collected in the 1800's by people hired
by Fraz Boas. It consists of age, sex, blood
quantum, tribal affiliation, some genealogical
information, six cranial measurements, and six
postcranial measurements.
- Several hospitals and clinics exist in the
Missoula area.
WRITING A RESEARCH PROPOSAL
The proposal (or research design) is a formal part
of the process of doing research in anthropology. It's
purpose is to communicate your research interests and
plans to anybody who needs to know about them. You
will certainly have to communicate your research plans
to your thesis committee. In many cases, you may need
permissions from department heads, campus committees,
potential collaborators, curators of museums holding
specimens you may want to use, and other potential
advisors also need to know what your plans are.
As a general rule you should present your proposed
research in the best light possible, but stop short of
exaggeration. Do not hide or disguise weak sections of
your project, because someone may be able to offer
suggestions for making it stronger.
What a research proposal usually ends up being is
a brief, preliminary version of what will eventually
become the introduction and materials/methods sections
of the finished thesis. You should try to keep the
length under 5 pages if possible. Your goal is to
address any questions the reader might have in as
concise a manner as possible.
Individual faculty members will have preferences
as to the format of your proposal. In physical
anthropology, there is a fairly standard format with
the following sections.
- Identification section. Not labelled as a
separate section, the identification section
usually forms the heading at the beginning of your
proposal. Information included in the
identification section is:
- Your name.
- Your title and institutional address. Most
of you can give yourselves the title
"Graduate Student" and your institutional
address as Department of Anthropology,
University of Montana, Missoula, MT 59812.
- A title for the project. This title should
be descriptive of what you are going to be
doing. An informative title might be
something like: "Dental Wear at the Pocket
Road Site (CA-Sac-42)". An uninformative and
unacceptable title would be something like:
"Research in Biological Anthropology".
- The date.
- Introduction section. Often labelled
"Introduction". This section should include the
following information:
- A statement of what research question you are
investigating. Tell what it is that you are
hoping to demonstrate with the data you
collect for this project. It is good if you
can state your research questions in terms of
hypotheses to be tested, and best if you can
provide null hypotheses that you will try to
reject. If you don't know what hypotheses
are, you should take a statistics course
immediately.
- An explanation of why your research questions
are important. What will the consequences be
for our understanding of human beings? What
new light can you shed on some controversial
issue? Where does your research fit within
the overall scheme of your subdiscipline?
These and similar questions may be
appropriate ones to answer depending on the
nature of your project. The purpose of this
is to help someone who may not be familiar
with your field to understand why this
research needs to be done (and perhaps why
they should cooperate with you in doing it).
Try to frame these explanations in simple
language if possible - pretend you are trying
to explain your research to your high school
biology teacher.
- A brief statement of why your background
qualifies you to do research on this topic.
Have you done similar research before? Have
you had training in the techniques you will
be using? How long have you been interested
in these research questions?
- Materials and methods section. Often labelled
"Materials and Methods". In this section you
explain how you plan to answer your research
questions and test your hypotheses. The following
information should be included:
- Materials that will be used. What specimens,
archive, people, etc. will you need to
examine in order to answer your research
question? Where are these data sources
located? From which collections or
facilities will you need permissions to
examine materials they may have? These
and/or other questions about the nature of
any materials you will use should be
addressed.
- Methods for gathering data. How will your
data be gathered? What measurements will you
need to take? What instruments will you use
to gather your data? How will your data be
recorded? Will the data you gather
constitute a representative random sample?
These and/or other questions about the manner
in which you will collect your data should be
addressed.
- Methods for analyzing data. How will your
data be analyzed? What statistical
techniques will you use to test your
hypotheses? Are these statistical techniques
appropriate for the type of data you will
collect? These and/or other questions about
how the data will be analyzed should be
addressed.
- Implications section. Often labelled
"Implications of this Research Project". In this
section you should briefly discuss the conclusions
you would draw if you were able to reject your
null hypotheses or if you failed to reject your
null hypotheses. The purpose of this section is
to convince the reader that your research will
actually generate some conclusions in the end.
- Bibliography. Often labelled "References Cited".
You should include complete references for each
citation in the body of your research design. In
addition, many research proposals contain a
section labelled "Other References", which
contains references not cited in the body of the
research design, but which the researcher has read
and thinks are important. The purpose of the
"Other References" section is to demonstrate to
the reader that you have done a substantial amount
of preliminary research. An "Other References"
section is not legitimate in the thesis itself-
only in a proposal. The number of references in
your bibliography will vary, but the more is
better.
- Budget section. Often labelled "Budget". If you
are applying to a funding agency, such as NSF,
NIH, or the Leakey Foundation, they will want to
know how much money you need and what you will
spend it on. In this case you should include a
budget, itemized in as detailed a manner as
possible.
A SAMPLE PROPOSAL
The following document is a project research
design that I put together in 1984 for a project that I
never did pursue. I pulled it out of a file and
spruced it up for you to use as an example.
RESEARCH PROPOSAL
VISUAL DETERMINATION OF SEX FROM THE HUMAN SCAPULA
Randall R. Skelton, Ph.D.
Associate professor
Department of Anthropology
University of Montana
Missoula, MT 59812
September 23, 1993
Introduction
The goal of this project is to test a method for
visual determination of sex from the human scapula
discovered by Skelton (1978). A large sample of
scapulas of known sex will be scored using the Skelton
method and the accuracy of the method will be
evaluated. The working hypothesis is that the Skelton
method is able to identify the correct sex of scapulas
with a rate of success that is significantly higher
than chance alone. This hypothesis may be accepted if
we can reject the null hypothesis that accuracy of the
Skelton method is equal to the accuracy expected by
chance alone.
The determination of sex from the skeleton is an
important concern for osteologists and forensic
anthropologists who base their analyses on data
obtained from examination of skeletal material. The
pelvis is thought to be the best part of the skeleton
from which to determine sex, and the skull the second
best (Bass, 1971), but in many cases the skull and/or
the pelvis are missing from a skeleton and the ability
to determine sex from an alternative anatomical region
would be useful. The ability to determine sex from the
scapula may also be useful in situations where the sex
determined from the pelvis or skull is uncertain.
In 1978 I undertook a study of metrical and visual
methods for sex determination of the scapula (Skelton,
1978). I am, therefore, familiar with the existing
methods of sex determination for this bone and with the
bone's anatomy. During the 1978 study I proposed a set
of visual criteria which seemed to be useful for
determining sex, and subsequent informal observations
have convinced me that this method is worth pursuing
further. I have an earned doctorate in physical
anthropology and have worked as a staff osteologist or
consulting osteologist on several archaeological
projects during the past twelve years.
Materials and Methods
I plan to test the Skelton method for visual
determination of sex from the scapula using a sample of
at least 50 male and 50 female scapulas. A suitable
skeletal collection is housed at the Lowie Museum of
Anthropology, University of California, Berkeley.
Permission to use the skeletal collection will have to
be obtained from Frank Norrick, Curator of the museum.
The following information will be recorded for
each scapula:
- Specimen identification number.
- Sex as determined from the pelvis using the method
of Phenice (1969).
- The angle that the axis of scapular breadth makes
with the axis of maximum scapular length. This
angle should approach 90 degrees in females, but
be closer to 60 degrees in males. [Note: I should
have included a diagram or illustration of this
and the following characteristics. I didn't, in
order to save space. Do include illustrations in
your proposal].
- Sub-glenoid concavity. The axillary border of the
scapula should be concave in females, but straight
in males.
- Relationship between the tip of the coracoid
process and the superior angle. When the scapula
is placed in anatomical position the tip of the
coracoid process should be inferior to the
superior angle in females, but superior to the
superior angle in males.
- Shape of the glenoid fossa in cross section. The
glenoid fossa should be deep when viewed in cross
section in females, but shallow in males.
The condition of the scapula for characteristics 3
through 6 above will be recorded as hypermasculine (2),
masculine (1), ambiguous (0), feminine (-1), and
hyperfeminine (-2). A contingency table will then be
constructed for each characteristic that compares sex
and score for that characteristic. These contingency
tables will have the form shown in figure 1. For each
characteristic, a chi-square test will reveal whether
there is a non-random distribution of scores by sex.
An overall score will be obtained for each
specimen by adding the scores for each of the 4
characteristics that are shown to have a non-random
distribution by sex from the chi-square test. If the
overall score is greater than zero, then the specimen
will be diagnosed as male. If the overall score is less
than zero, then the specimen will be diagnosed as female.
These diagnoses will be compared to the known sex of
the specimen and each diagnosis will be recorded as
correct or incorrect. The null hypothesis that the
frequency of correct diagnoses is equal to 50% will be
tested.
Data collection should take one week at the Lowie
Museum of Anthropology, University of California,
Berkeley, CA.
Implications of this Research
If the Skelton method for visual sex determination
from the scapula is more accurate than expected by
chance, then this method would be a useful addition to
list of sex determination methods available to an
osteologist. If the method is no more accurate than
chance, then the human scapula can be considered
uninformative for sex using visual methods.
References Cited
Bass, William M., 1971. Human Osteology: A Laboratory
and Field Manual of the Human Skeleton. Missouri
Archaeological Society, Columbia, MO.
Skelton, Randall R., 1978. Sexing the scapula: Various
methods. Paper prepared in satisfaction of the
"Substantive Research Paper Requirement" for the
M.A. degree in Anthropology, University of
California, Davis.
Phenice, T. W., 1969. A newly developed visual method
of sexing the Os Pubis. American Journal of
Physical Anthropology 30: 297-302.
Other References
Bainbridge, Douglass. and Santiago Genoves Tarazaga,
1956. A study of sex differences in the scapula.
Journal of the Royal Anthropological Institute of
Great Britain and Northern Ireland 86:109-134.
Hrdlicka, Ales, 1942a, The scapula: Visual
observations. American Journal of Physical
Anthropology 29:73-94.
Hrdlicka, Ales, 1942b, The adult scapula: Additional
observations and measurements. American Journal
of Physical Anthropology 29:262-415.
Stewart, T. D., 1954. Sex determination of the
skeleton by guess and by measurement. American
Journal of Physical Anthropology 12:385-392.
Budget
Equipment: Digital Calipers $142.95
Travel: air fare: Missoula to San Francisco $378.32
bus fare: daily, 5 days (@$2/day) $10.00
Lodging: 5 days at Motel 6 Berkeley
(@32.95/day + 8.25% tax) $164.75
Food: 5 days at $16 per diem $80.00
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TOTAL $776.02
CHOOSING A THESIS COMMITTEE
Your thesis committee's job is to make sure that
your thesis research is comparable to the standards for
thesis research on a nationwide basis. It is also
their job to make suggestions for how you can improve
your thesis. Ultimately they will sit in judgement of
your thesis during your defense. Obviously, your
thesis committee is a very important group of people,
and should be chosen carefully.
A thesis committee must consist of at least 3
University of Montana - Missoula faculty members.
There may be more people on the committee, but
remember that the more people on the committee, the
more people you will have to satisfy.
One person is chair of the committee and that person must
be a UM-Missoula Anthropology faculty member. At least
one persom must be from a department other than Anthropology.
Additional members (beyond the basic 3) may be a
non-academic professional anthropologist or someone from
another university or college.
You can not officially appoint a thesis committee
until you have fully passed your comprehensive exams
and satisfied all conditions. However, you may work
with an "unofficial" thesis committee. To formally
appoint a thesis committee, you must obtain a special form for
the purpose and file it at the graduate school.
DOING YOUR THESIS RESEARCH
Normally, your thesis research will consist of
collecting some sort of data and/or analyzing it.
Remember that you must generate new knowledge.
WRITE UP YOUR THESIS
Thesis Format
Physical anthropologists use the standard format
for an scientific paper. This format consists of 6
parts, each with a specific content. The 6 parts of a
scientific paper are:
- Introduction. In this section you introduce your
research question, within an anthropological
context. Your research question should be in the
form of a testable hypothesis. Setting up the
context of a research question normally requires a
review of the literature on the subject. Here are
some things to present in your introduction.
- How your subject fits into anthropology in
general. How it fits into your
subdiscipline. How it fits into theoretical
positions within your subdiscipline.
- What other people have worked on the same or
similar subjects, and what these people said.
Controversies that exist surrounding this
subject. Whether there are alternative
explanations for some phenomenon that your
subject addresses.
- The history of ideas on the subject that your
research question relates to.
- Materials and Methods. In this section you
discuss and describe all issues related to how you
collected data to test your hypothesis. You
should desribe what specimens, collections,
archives, or other data sources you used. You
should describe in detail how you went about
collecting your data. You should describe any
equipment or instruments you used and any
measurements you took. You should describe the
statistical techniques and/or other methods of
analysis you used.
- Results. In this section you present the results
of your analysis. This is not the section where
you interpret your results. Present your results
in the form of raw data, using tables and figures
where appropriate. Present the results of any
statistical tests you applied to your data.
- Discussion. This is the section where you
interpret your results. You should thoroughly
explore all possible interpretations of your
results and how you chose one interpretation over
another. You should discuss any problems with
your data or results. The basic principle is to
try to anticipate and answer any questions a
reader might have about your results. Don't try
to hide results that don't agree with your
interpretation - explain them instead. You should
try to present your results in the best light
possible, but don't exaggerate them and don't
argue beyond what can be supported by your
results.
- Conclusion. In this section you relate your
interpretations of your results to your original
hypothesis, and draw a conclusion as to whether it
is supported or not. Discuss what your results
and conclusions imply for the general issues in
anthropology as a whole and within your
subdiscipline that you discussed in your
introduction. In many cases, you will find that
your research raises more questions than it
answers. You should discuss these new questions
and what research should be undertaken in the
future to address them.
- Bibliography. In this section you should
reference all published and unpublished works
cited in your text. You should not include any
works that were not cited in your text.
Citations and References
All research is based on ideas, knowledge, and data
that were generated by previous researchers. Your
contribution will be a small amount of additional
knowledge in a very specific area. Courtesy, standard
scientific practice, and ethics require that you give
proper credit to the source of any fact or idea. To
fail to do so is plagiarism.
A citation occurs within the text of a document
and is a way of telling the reader the source of any
data, facts, or ideas that are not the author's own
original work. References are the entries in your
bibliography. Citations point to references.
The difference between a great scholar and a
plagiarist is in the throughness with which they
document the source of the ideas and facts they are
using. A plagiarist seeks glory for him- or herself
by neglecting to acknowledge the true source of
ideas and facts, thereby making it look like he or
she was the one who thought up the ideas or
discovered the facts. A scholar achieves recognition
for his or her ability to gather ideas and facts from a
variety of sources and synthesize them with his or her
own facts or data.
Graduate programs reward scholars and punish
plagiarists. It is ridiculously easy to distinguish
between the two. Your strategy, therefore, should be
to try to be as scholarly as possible. There are
three principles to follow in order to appear as
scholarly as possible.
- The more sources you use the better. The longer
your bibliography the better. In the course of
your thesis research, you will probably accumulate
a large pile of xeroxes, notes, articles, and books
that you read at some point. Use as many of the
articles and books you read as possible. Look each
one over and think about where you could work what
this author(s) said into your thesis, or where
you could use what this author(s) said to reinforce
a point you are trying to make in your thesis. If
the author(s) disagrees with you, use them as an
example of a different point of view, or set their
idea up as something to be tested or refuted by your
data. Recognize this principle before you start doing
your background library research and apply it to
every item of reading you pick up. Soon you will have an
enormous bibliography, and your thesis committee
will be very proud of you. You not only seem like
a great scholar - you are one, because this is
exactly what great scholars do.
- Use a lot of citations. If you have a citation at
the end of every sentence, so much the better. An
absolutely wonderful thesis would have more
citations than actual text.
- Be thorough. Try to make sure you cover all
points of view and cite them. When you trace the
history of an idea, try to go back farther than
anyone has ever gone before. Try to pull in
references from other fields of science.
Using Citations and References
The general rule is that anything and everything
appearing in your paper has to be cited, with the
following exceptions. Things that DO NOT need to be
cited include the following:
- Data or facts which you collected or generated
during the course of the current research project
and which are presented for the very first time in
your thesis do not need to be cited.
- Ideas that are truly original (thought of by you
for the first time ever in the known history of
the world) do not need to be cited. Usually this
means that the ideas were generated by putting
together ideas from several other authors, and are
being presented in this paper for the very first
time. In this case these other authors should be
given credit (cited), and you should word your
idea in such a manner that it is clear that you are
now presenting an original idea. For example, the
wording 'the facts presented in the foregoing
analyses suggest that ...', alerts the reader
that you are about to propose an idea that you
thought of after reading some other documents.
- Explanations or paraphrases, in your own words, of
a procedure or idea in another document (which
must be cited) do not need to be cited themselves.
For example, 'the measurement of cranial length,
as defined by Bass (1971) involves using a
spreading caliper to measure the maximum distance
from the point between the two brow ridges and the
back of the skull ...', is an example of an
explanation of something defined in a cited
document.
- Conclusions drawn from your own data do not need
to be cited. Be sure to word your conclusions in
such a way that the reader can recognize that
these are your original ideas.
- "General knowledge" doesn't need to be cited.
There is, however, some debate over what
constitutes general knowledge. Most authorities
would agree that the type of information learned
in public schools in grades kindergarten through
8th grade are general knowledge. Some examples
are: "the world is round", "cats hunt mice",
"grass is green", and "humans have 2 legs".
However, the consensus is that things learned in
high school and college are not general knowledge
- When writing a document in a certain field,
certain basic facts that are widely known in that
field can be considered general knowledge under
certain conditions. In physical anthropology you
can assume that most people know facts similar to
the following, which can be considered general
knowledge for biological anthropologists: "the
scientific name for humans is Homo sapiens" and
"the anatomical name for the thigh bone is the
femur". Even in these cases, however, your thesis
can be improved by citing and referencing somebody
who actually said these facts. Most of these
ideas can easily be located in an introductory
textbook. It takes little effort to modify the
first example to "the scientific name for humans
is Homo sapiens (Nelson and Jurmain, 1988:211), then
reference the Nelson and Jurmain text in your
bibliography.
Citation and Reference Format
The format for citations and references should be
what is currently used in the primary journal for
whatever branch of physical anthropology your thesis
reasearch falls into. Human Evolution theses should
use the Journal of Human Evolution format, primatology
theses should use the American Journal of Primatology
format, and human variation theses should use the Human
Biology format. Other types of theses can use the
American Journal of Physical Anthropology format.
Forensic theses may use the Journal of Forensic
Sciences format. Get an issue of one of these journals
and copy some articles to use for citation and
referencing examples. Most of these journals publish
a "Guide for Authors" at regular intervals that discusses
citation and reference format.
DEFENDING YOUR THESIS
The last formal step in your graduate career is
defending your thesis. The thesis defense is an oral
presentation of your thesis research. Thesis defenses
are open to the public. Following your presentation of
your research, the members of your thesis committee
will ask you questions about your research. Any member
of the audience may ask a question upon recognition by
the chair of the thesis committee. I suggest that you
sit in on a someone else's thesis defense so that you
know what to expect.
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